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jus lookin for a place to right...if u dun mind

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here i am typing away, trying to find out feelings in the form of something i can say,

it's like romeo and juliet, but even shakespeare cant right this play,

ma heart is too difficult to understand, its as elasticky as a rubber band,

yet as soft as the whitest sand, and as powerful as an iron man,

and yet, when a step of her is taken, ma heart fails and comes back,

when i'm not with her, ma nerves cant reach the bones in ma back,

i don't know why, ma body is messed, energy is what i lack,

it's like a thousand arrows are being targetted at me as the attack,

and i stand there thinking im dodging these sticks,

trying to look for the right one, so many but a few special picks,

thinking i've found the one, looking at it realizing i'm done,

cause the stick was not what it had seemed to be,

it was just like the rest of the water drops in the sea,

this whole time i was struggling to grab this chance,

thinking with it, ma life will change, it will inhance,

and when i will get it, it can save myself from the devil's dance,

but it's deception has lead me into a mesmerizing trance,

and while i was concentrated on the arrow, i was free,

to any other problem coming straight at me,

in the form of another arrow, leading me to this great sorrow,

looking for light's guidance, now will you lend me some that i can borrow?

 

 

i need a hug! :(...gurls are mean!

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jus lookin for a place to right...if u dun mind

-----------------------------------------------------------

 

here i am typing away, trying to find out feelings in the form of something i can say,

it's like romeo and juliet, but even shakespeare cant right this play,

ma heart is too difficult to understand, its as elasticky as a rubber band,

yet as soft as the whitest sand, and as powerful as an iron man,

and yet, when a step of her is taken, ma heart fails and comes back,

when i'm not with her, ma nerves cant reach the bones in ma back,

i don't know why, ma body is messed, energy is what i lack,

it's like a thousand arrows are being targetted at me as the attack,

and i stand there thinking im dodging these sticks,

trying to look for the right one, so many but a few special picks,

thinking i've found the one, looking at it realizing i'm done,

cause the stick was not what it had seemed to be,

it was just like the rest of the water drops in the sea,

this whole time i was struggling to grab this chance,

thinking with it, ma life will change, it will inhance,

and when i will get it, it can save myself from the devil's dance,

but it's deception has lead me into a mesmerizing trance,

and while i was concentrated on the arrow, i was free,

to any other problem coming straight at me,

in the form of another arrow, leading me to this great sorrow,

looking for light's guidance, now will you lend me some that i can borrow?

i need a hug! :(...gurls are mean!

 

as salamualikum, zan da man:

that was nice :). The bold part reminds me of The Matrix. aww yeah.

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omg i forgot to change tht, i made this profile when i was in gr 8, gimme a break...thnx a lot, i thought i cud share ma feelings with u ppl, only some ppl i guess.

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