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SkyWalker Vs Superman

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Superman,

If u want me to be honest,

Your nothing but a comic,

Lacking common logic,

I spit knowledge like a prophet,

Unbreakable;

Like a promise,

Unbreakable;

Like im Onyx,

You're a washed up Pokemon and if it's a battle you want,

I've got more demons in my pocket,

That'll be tearin out your glottis...

 

That was weak. I'm just warming up.

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I didn't par you,

 

I smoked you like a spliff of weed,

 

I flow like lava, so...

 

You could say I'm spitting heat,

 

You’re as warm as a sip of tea,

 

He named himself Superman,

 

Yet he'll never make villains flee,

 

This Clark Kent is far-fetched if he think I won't leave him half dead,

 

My palms red with the blood shed from his scarred head,

 

He’s nothing more than a ‘crackpot’; ‘jarred meth’,*

 

Leave his corpse scattered;

 

So he’s more like shattered 'glass' then*?

 

I’ll end your life like I’m Kryptonite,

 

Tell Lois to give her kiss goodbye,

 

I’m never thinking twice,

 

Tear this Kryptonians limbs off in mid-flight,

 

Down goes your carcass, as well as your ego,

 

Now you're nothing more than a ‘fallen hero’...

 

*These lines maybe over a few peoples’ heads.

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Lol I don't think you understand rhymes schemes.

 

The 'scattered' rhymes with 'shattered' and the 'jarred meth' rhymes with 'glass then'.

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Meth didn't rhyme with then is my point

It's called a slant rhyme. You have a lot to learn about rap my young padawan

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Lol not it isn't they sound nothing like each other

Stop trolling!

 

The rap you posted doesn't really have any flow either

And do better!!

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