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Was pissed Off...Jus A Free,

 

 

He Feels Suppressed –A Prisoner In His Own Home – Like He’s Under House Arrest,

Not Allowed To Leave Or Breathe Without Consent, No Wonder He’s Depressed

He Used To Be Known As One Of The Best, Because He Would Ace Every Test,

Always Outshone All The Rest, But Now He’s Something Even His Parents Detest,

No ones Impressed, And Just Look At The Haters As They Smile, Laugh And Jest.

He Was The First Born In A Poor Family, And At First They Lived Very Happily,

Both Parents Worked Hard Day And Night – But Things Soon Changed Drastically,

They Didn’t Know What Was Happening, Heated Emotions Flared Dramatically,

And Like An Unseen Foe – Tragically None Could Avoid The Inevitable Catastrophe,

So How Could The Have Predicted, Their Son Could Grow Up To Be So Vindictive,

Their Emotions Were Conflicted & All That Was Left Now Was To Get Him Evicted

 

 

Oh, I Did'nt Get Kicked Out...I'm Ok Wit My Parents Now...

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you're still garbage and still starting threads for your crap

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you're still garbage and still starting threads for your crap

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:lol: listen Sal, ur wack...wow u can write multies...big deal...no1 cares...

 

u talk alot of crap for someone who i havent seen drop 1 decent piece...

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yeah i don't remember but i think it really really sucked so i didn't reply

but according to you i'm "wack" and "can't drop 1 decent piece" so show me how it's done champ and we can do this

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salam

I like that. I know how you feel/felt man. btw, i love the title! I thought it was gonna be about some sciency thing - like a mother giving birth to a rotten looking thing. But it turned out to be your poem - and I understand what you mean by rotten foetus now. It sounds kinda sick! But its still cool.

 

Peace

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you're still garbage and still starting threads for your crap

 

Yuno bro i really dont get why you're so harsh to anyone who raps, fine you're good mashAllah :) but let the others share their piece too eh?

 

Theres constructive criticism then theres plain evilness :(

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Asalamoalikum, folks:

 

This poem cheers me up. Awesome.

 

-jonas

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Yuno bro i really dont get why you're so harsh to anyone who raps, fine you're good mashAllah :) but let the others share their piece too eh?

 

Theres constructive criticism then theres plain evilness :(

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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Guest Sister Who

Awww, no need to be sad bro :flower:

 

Be nice to your little brothers and shhmmilllleee. :D

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